I have read several Sean Michael books, and found them to be good books. This is a good idea, but not what I like. I just couldn't appreciate the different point of view/way of speaking. Devon doesn't complete many of his sentences, they just end, and new thoughts start coming out of his mouth or mind if it's his turn at POV. Which is how he is supposed to act, I just don't enjoy reading that. Barney is less difficult to read, but even he seems to be infected by the spastic bug. It's just me, I know that, I'm sure many people would enjoy this method of writing. I was expecting something else, and my disappointment shows in my review.